یہ مختصر افسانہ شروع سے آخر تک ایک کردار کے خیالات کے گرد گھوم رہاہے۔ کہانی کا اہم کردار اپنی کم عقلی اور غیر سنجیدہ طبیعت سے ایک غلط فہمی میں مبتلا ہوکر ذہنی کشمکش اور انتشار میں رہتا ہے اور آخر میں حقیقت آشکار ہونے پر بھی اس کے رویے میں ذرا تبدیلی نہیں آتی اور نہ ہی افسوس ہوتا ہے ۔
Ayesha Akram, with a sharp eye for detail and a heart attuned to the complexities of life, weaves stories that echo the realities of modern Urdu literature.
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Ayesha Akram, with a sharp eye for detail and a heart attuned to the complexities of life, weaves stories that echo the realities of modern Urdu literature.
15 thoughts on “Ghalat Fehmi by Ayesha Akram”
This is really good ❤️
More power to you Ayesha🌻
افسانے کے ساتھ ساتھ انداز بیاں خوب 😉
Impressive Story, Excellent Writing Skills, And An Attractive Title That Blends Theme With Fact-Based Views..😍❤️
Great 👌
love that I could see into your mindset and read exactly what you were feeling when you thought out situations.
Wish you very best of luck for future.
You are a very good writer i like your Afsana you wrote this afsana with beautiful words. Allah Alimighty give you more success with his blessings.
Good one I loved it
More power to u ayesha
Bht acha afsana hai
It’s a good one … language, imagery everything is on point. Imagery in the starting scene is really good… Like a writer who’s been writing for years. Central idea is also very impressive.
The characters of Haniyah and Abba ji are very progressive. It is worth reading… For sure
This is really good and helpful for us
Well done ayesha✨
“غلط فہمی” by عائشہ اکرم is a concise and engaging short story that can be easily read in one sitting. First and foremost, I’d like to congratulate Ayesha on the publication of her debut story.
The opening scene is beautifully crafted, and I must commend Ayesha on her skillful use of personification, which paints a vivid picture. The story’s theme, though not complex, resonates with everyday experiences. Zoya’s envy and competitive nature are relatable, and her parents’ advice to focus on her own path rather than comparing herself to others is well-integrated.
The character of Khala Jan is well-portrayed, representing those who often fuel comparison and envy in others. Zoya’s father’s supportive stance on her education and passions is commendable.
However, I noticed several proofreading errors that disrupted the narrative flow. Attention to detail can enhance the overall reading experience. Additionally, some tense inconsistencies detracted from the story’s cohesion.
Considering this is Ayesha’s first story, it’s a promising start. With refinement and dedication, she has the potential to produce even better works in the future. Ayesha demonstrates writing talent, and I look forward to seeing her growth as a writer.
My Rating: 3.5/5 ⭐
بہت اچھا افسانہ تھا۔ کہانی ایسی تھی کہ ریڈر بلاک کے باوجود بھی میں شروع سے لے کر آخر تک اس قدر متجسس رہا کہ کہانی کا انجام کیا ہوگا۔ بہت بہترین طریقے سے عائشہ نے تمام کردار، تمام تر ڈائیلاگز، اور کہانی کے فلو کو قلمبند کیا۔ افسانے سے یہ سبق حاصل ہوتا ہے کہ ہمیشہ کہانی کا صرف ایک رخ جاننا آپ کے لیے وبالِ جان بن سکتا ہے اس لیے ہمیں یر حال میں مکمل جانداری یا سکے کی دونوں سائڈز کا علم ہونا چاہیے ۔ امید ہے کہ عائشہ مزید لکھتی رہے گی اور ہمیں اپنے قلم کاری کے ہنر سے نوازری ریے گی! بہت داد
Writing style and selection of words was really good. Keep it up
Just fabulous . I really enjoyed this piece of art …
The opening lines are amazing , it’s worth reading in a single sitting…. The moments of miscommunication are so natural and realistic that anyone can relate to them.
The narrative flow smoothly, one of the strongest elements of the afsana that how it highlights the importance of clarity in communication and how assumptions can sometimes cause unnecessary pain.
At this point i would say , “kuch batein smjhane mein waqt lagta hai , or Kuch batein ghalat smjh li jati hain” …..
Sometimes we compare ourselves to others just to make ourselves superior, but this is just waste of time and efforts , show your self as you are , everyone is beautiful in their own way …
The portrayal of ghalat fehmi is beautifully depicted with the main character , the generational gap of khala and zoya is the proof of this ghalat fehmi….
The supportive characters like Abba and amma are jem , they know what is right for their daughter … The spice of Instagram and posting is another point which we can relate, for few likes we transform ourselves….
The issue that you elevate is the modern world issue which should be discuss…
Overall its a thought provoking and heart warming afsana … Best of luck for your coming works … Add me in your readers list …
My dear Ayesha your writing on your afsana is truly impressive,
Your insights are thought-provoking and profoundly expressive.
Your clarity and style make complex ideas shine,
You’re a talented writer, keep sharing your divine!”